The Boy Who Going To Save The World

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The Boy Who Going To Save The World

Post by AllegoryStark » Sat Apr 09, 2016 2:57 pm

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5 Minutes of beauty, at least, I hope...

Editor: D-Monsta
Anime: One Piece
AMV Song: Mako + Paris&Simo - Way Back Home
Outro song: EDEN - End Credits
Link: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=200596


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Re: The Boy Who Going To Save The World

Post by post-it » Sat Apr 09, 2016 6:42 pm


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Re: The Boy Who Going To Save The World

Post by Kireblue » Sat Apr 09, 2016 7:20 pm

I think that you went a little overboard on a few things in this video, but the overall mood was good, and it started off as a pretty solid character profile. The places where it started to go a little off track is when you started adding in more and more unnecessary effects and text. I also wasn't immediately a fan of the dialogue that you were adding to the video, but you picked some pretty good lines. I think that when you're adding in dialogue, you should reduce the song's volume a bit though. Having them both play at full volume overwhelms the audio levels. Also, when you add in subtitles, you should pick a more standard font and add a thin black border to it. Adding a small drop shadow will also help the text become easier to read even when its on top of a completely white scene or background.

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Re: The Boy Who Going To Save The World

Post by AllegoryStark » Sun Apr 10, 2016 6:46 am

Thank you for the comment.
I didn't use a lot of typography and subtitle, so I doesn't know which font to pick. I will try to improve my font and audio.
Still, I work so hard in the audio, especially the final part. They wasn't speaking in the same beat of the song. So I need first to find the part that have not background music, after to cut each "Luffy" and I find a way that we will not feel that it was a repeat of the same sound. And I need to speed up some part too. Looks simple, but need a hard work !
Some part have maybe too much effect, you right, but I'm scare that is boring. It is also 5 minutes video, just trying to keep your eyes !

Just add that the hardest part it was to find scene selection. Especially finding some good images composition and good angles in more than 730 episodes.

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