Yeah, yeah, it's a One Punch Man AMV. But I couldn't resist. And it was lot's of fun to make. I'm also certainly considering it one of my main action videos I am making on the road to becoming a great action AMV editor.
So feedback it greatly appreciated!
Thanks!
ONE - Feedback appreciated!
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King Redeem
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Re: ONE - Feedback appreciated!
Technically speaking, your pacing and scene selection are really good in this one. I was hesitant to watch another One Punch Man action AMV, but I was pleasantly surprised by your story building. I like that it started with Genos and his struggle, following up with Saitama when all hope is lost. Very clear and well-structured. It's obvious you put thought into it, and it really helps the video shine.
Personally, not a fan of the speaking portions. That's just me though. I think the story you were trying to tell was getting across just fine without the dialogue.
I would be proud of this one, one of the best OPM action AMVs I've seen thus far
Personally, not a fan of the speaking portions. That's just me though. I think the story you were trying to tell was getting across just fine without the dialogue.
I would be proud of this one, one of the best OPM action AMVs I've seen thus far
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Pikapwn
- Getting Pikapwn'd
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Re: ONE - Feedback appreciated!
King Redeem wrote:Technically speaking, your pacing and scene selection are really good in this one. I was hesitant to watch another One Punch Man action AMV, but I was pleasantly surprised by your story building. I like that it started with Genos and his struggle, following up with Saitama when all hope is lost. Very clear and well-structured. It's obvious you put thought into it, and it really helps the video shine.
Personally, not a fan of the speaking portions. That's just me though. I think the story you were trying to tell was getting across just fine without the dialogue.
I would be proud of this one, one of the best OPM action AMVs I've seen thus far
Wow, thanks a lot!
Yeah, I was conflicted about the voice over, but I decided to go with it. I'll take that into account though in future videos.