[AMV] Unforgettable Days - HD [1080p]

[BaYmOnE]

Heeey guys, This is my first video, hope you like it ! ^-^

[BaYmOnE]

! Ohayoo Every Otaku in the world !

This is our First AMV, so our team hope for some critics and some advices from you guys and thanx for watching .
Enjoy!

[tayuyashoujo]

This had a really good mood! It got me really pumped and reminded me why shounen series are so fun. I think you really nailed the instrumental sections with the fast cuts of fun scenes, but I don't think you needed the typography sections beforehand. They weren't integrated into the AMV so they felt like they were a part of a completely different video, and they broke the mood and flow of the video. There were also a couple rough cuts that accidentally cut to black or flashed another scene for a second, so keep an eye out for those.
Some sequences that could be improved were the scenes between Naruto and his father, Kiritsugu and Shirou, and young Kiritsugu and the girl. The Naruto & young Kiritsugu scenes lasted too long and needed more cuts, and the Kiritsugu and Shirou scene also felt a little out-of-place with the sudden voice over, but I can see what you were going for.

My main critique for the video was just the quality of the footage, but that's nothing too hard to fix. In the future you should look for higher quality episodes without subtitles, or crop them out (the blur softened it a little, but you can still easily tell they were there).

[BaYmOnE]

ooh thank you thank you soo much. you know that's my first AMV and i think it was good as a beginner. I mad the typography sections bcz I thought the lyrics in these section is very inspirational and put t there to insist on the lyrics of the song, i think u understand what i want to do. About the quality of the footage, u know that u can't find HD quality for Dragon ball Or HxH the old one just for exemple.

Thank you again for ur critic, and i'll pay attention in the next AMV !