Arpeggio of Blue Steel

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Aikonara
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Arpeggio of Blue Steel

Post by Aikonara » Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:47 pm

Video: Arpeggio of Blue Steel
Category: Action
Anime: Arpeggio of Blue Steel
Song: Strength of a Thousand Men
Artist: Two Steps From Hell
Creator: Aikonara

Hey people, this is my very first Anime Music Video, please tell me what you think and what could be improved.
Thanks :)

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Changelling
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Re: Arpeggio of Blue Steel

Post by Changelling » Mon Sep 21, 2015 10:15 pm

Welcome to the AMV community!
Regarding the video, you really need to make better use of clip cutting tool, and synchronize with different beats of the song. Putting 1 long clip with the music without editing it (or at least editing it enough) means that you don't know why you want to do an AMV, and that should change. Also, try not to use clips that have text/credits on them. They're distracting and not meant to be in an AMV.
But anyway 1st AMVs rarely ever look good so don't be discouraged. Keep going!

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Re: Arpeggio of Blue Steel

Post by Aikonara » Tue Sep 22, 2015 12:33 am

Changelling wrote:Welcome to the AMV community!
Regarding the video, you really need to make better use of clip cutting tool, and synchronize with different beats of the song. Putting 1 long clip with the music without editing it (or at least editing it enough) means that you don't know why you want to do an AMV, and that should change. Also, try not to use clips that have text/credits on them. They're distracting and not meant to be in an AMV.
But anyway 1st AMVs rarely ever look good so don't be discouraged. Keep going!
Thanks a lot for your reply, I'll see what I can do about this in the future.
Again, thanks for being positive about my first amv. :D

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