Gon vs Pitou Hardstyle
Hunter X Hunter My first AMV, need critique
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OobsTheGreat
- Joined: Mon Aug 31, 2015 2:17 pm
Hunter X Hunter My first AMV, need critique
Gon vs Pitou Hardstyle
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Tigrin
- Joined: Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:36 pm
Re: Hunter X Hunter My first AMV, need critique
For a first video it's not bad, I liked how the footage got more or less intense with the music. The subtitles were really distracting and I kept accidentally reading them instead of watching the video. It's better to use raw video that isn't subtitled. I think the limited footage sometimes made it feel like you were just letting scenes play out straight, so there wasn't much editing involved. I think if you're going to focus on only one or two fights, the story should be a little clearer... otherwise, maybe bring in more footage.