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The text in your video was extremely unnecessary. And you spent so much time lip syncing different characters to the song that you didn't actually show them doing anything or trying to "achieve their dreams". And so the message got completely lost. And so my advice to you is to focus less on trying to add cool effects and focus more on capturing feeling of your song.