Its a bit short, but you should still try to use more scenes and sync to the beats more. Also, if you're going to use your logo or intro, use it at the very beginning or end of your video. Don't just put it in the middle because it will be a distraction from the actual video.
But anyway, welcome to the site

I see that you're making use of the new embed feature that was just added

Since the length of your video really feels like a beta, there isn't really a lot to say about it. For the most part, the videos that people post here are at least a minute long, and the average would probably be somewhere around 3 minutes. And so try to make your next one a little longer. This will allow people to get a better idea of your editing style.