Your editing is fine, but your style is out dated. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, you just have to avoid constant flashes, but rather make use of light brightness and contrast, if you really want to add a bit of impact on those clips. Scan lines flashes were not necessary either, and just seemed out of place. I bet it would have looked great in raw without those effects.
Keep working on it bud, you'll get better. It's been ages since I've seen a bayblade amv, so that was kewl.
