Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

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Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by TritioAFB » Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:28 pm

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Time for me to show the first AC Video. The first because my participation is not over this year yet :bear:
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by Shui » Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:32 am

Looks like a really forced Crossover Vid you didn't have the time to execute properly. I don't get a thing that's going on, motivations of the charakters just aren't clear enough.
I'm BAD - I'm BAD too - let's fight! Oh there's a random girl. And a Monster too.. wtf

take more time on the next one is all I can say :shrug:
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by TritioAFB » Mon Dec 08, 2014 8:19 pm

Lack of betatesters, everybody vanished suddenly.

A fan of all those series gets easily the story, seems like the editors will have problems getting it :o
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by Sephirothskr » Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:34 pm

I can understand why some people may struggle with understanding it. I'm working with a video that has a LOT.... Of shows. So, sometimes, you have to generalize "what's going on in this scene? Can anyone understand even if they haven't seen the show?" Essentially, telling a story without context. Act of genesis did a great job at this. (I haven't seen your video yet, I'm just on my phone commenting. I may check it out when I get home) also, I thought you were using the song dies irae for a second there :p
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by TritioAFB » Sat Dec 13, 2014 1:18 am

I know that feel bro. I miss the days when people here commented actively :(
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by Mol » Sat Dec 13, 2014 1:36 am

It feels kinda tacky, why? Characters feel out of place mostly, idk if there is much you have done other than blend them better. Could have a bit clearer story, or at least solid storytelling in description :uhoh:. Also whats the first episode title or link?

Anyway at the same time , quite interesting watch :dino:

Or nvm found ep 1st in akross description :dino:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Deuterius 2.0: Dies Irae

Post by TritioAFB » Thu Dec 18, 2014 8:32 pm

I feel like telling the whole story could be kinda... long and boring. But I'll keep in mind about the storytelling into the video. Anyway, thanks for the comment pal
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