Reawaken - Gokukoku no Brynhildr AMV

[mattAMV]

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=197016

Youtube link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgNO-aS2W2E

Hey guys,

This is a video i made for a local AMV competition at my university. I had just under 18 days to do this, so as you can imagine i was quite rushed in making this. I feel if i had longer i could have made it better, but overall i am really happy at how it turned out

Onto the AMV, i first had the idea when i was listening to Porter Robinson - Sad Machine. Listening to the lyrics, i realised it pretty much could describe the relationship Murakami has with all of the girls in Gokukoku no Brynhildr, so i had to edit to it and make it happen. My main aim from this AMV was to improve my flow, and i think i have improved it just a bit I know my editing isn't the best, but this is only my 2nd AMV ive made and i am always looking to get better! So please, nail me with constructive critism on how to improve, its really appreciated. And ofcourse, if you liked it, let me know too Since you know, constructive critism is good, but knowing you liked it is also good.

Thanks,
Matt

[The_McLaughlin]

Not bad. Flowed pretty well, there were some areas where you relied matching the clip changing on the beat that I thought could have been timed a bit better for example at about 1:34-1:37 there seems to me that there are more flashes from the clip rapidly changing back and forth than there are beats. Overall though not bad.

[mattAMV]

Thanks alot for the feedback! About that bit at 1.34-1.37, maybe there were too many cutscreens on second look, but im not sure, when i did it it felt like it was right and fit well with the fast beat at that point. Maybe i am wrong. Either way, thanks for your comment