Just Can't have a Girl Friend [AMV]

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Surokanshyn
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Just Can't have a Girl Friend [AMV]

Post by Surokanshyn » Sun Apr 21, 2013 1:33 am

Hello, thi is announcment of my first amv! This amv is of anime Ore Shura. Please View and rate! :up:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EblccIeHGlQ
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http://goo.gl/3coQT

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NotReallyHere
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Re: Just Can't have a Girl Friend [AMV]

Post by NotReallyHere » Thu May 02, 2013 4:00 am

Yow!

Overall this was pretty enjoyable but there were some things that could be improved (for a future vid or something). The story itself was pretty clear, there's this guy with a bunch of girls around him but he can't get a girlfriend regardless. But... what does this dragon have to do with it? (Does he play videogames a lot or something?) Also, I noticed bits of subtitles in some scenes, so I assume you were cropping them out throughout the vid. Of course it is better to get sources without subs but assuming you couldn't get them cropping is definitely the better way to go, since subs completely would completely kill your amv, so good job on that! Sometimes it felt as if you cropped a bit too much though, as I could pretty much count pixels. Don't think that's what you wanted to happen lol. A bit more scenes in the last half would be better I think, the pace was kinda dull like this. The sync of the girl hitting the guy with the stick was nice tho, more of that please. :)

Also, "Mr. Roboto", I liked that one. XD

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