Hey guys, this is my second AMV ever so I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how I did with the scene selection but I put a lot more thought into forming some sort of story being told in my AMV. lol give me some feedback please!
[Turmoil] "On My Own" -- Second AMV :)
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Turmoil
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[Turmoil] "On My Own" -- Second AMV :)
Hey guys, this is my second AMV ever so I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how I did with the scene selection but I put a lot more thought into forming some sort of story being told in my AMV. lol give me some feedback please!
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lloyd9988
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Re: [Turmoil] "On My Own" -- Second AMV :)
This needs comments! *o* No AMV should be left without one comment. . . Even if its bad. . .
Pretty good ^.^ Really liked the effect-usage and scene selection. Plus, the tonality was very good as well. Especially for a second AMV, you did an amazing job! ^_^ Anyway, I believe you really did capture the love story of Toradora in a very great light.
3.5/5
Umm. . . I need to say something constructive to say: Keep some of the motion flowing so it allows it to stay smooth. Like, when you do a zoom-out, sometimes just keep the footage zooming out after the fast zoom-out to keep the flow going.
Edit: F*** I just checked, you did do that zoom-out thing.
Pretty good ^.^ Really liked the effect-usage and scene selection. Plus, the tonality was very good as well. Especially for a second AMV, you did an amazing job! ^_^ Anyway, I believe you really did capture the love story of Toradora in a very great light.
3.5/5 Umm. . . I need to say something constructive to say: Keep some of the motion flowing so it allows it to stay smooth. Like, when you do a zoom-out, sometimes just keep the footage zooming out after the fast zoom-out to keep the flow going.
Edit: F*** I just checked, you did do that zoom-out thing.
Last edited by lloyd9988 on Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:44 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Mkid
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Re: [Turmoil] "On My Own" -- Second AMV :)
hey, Congrats on recent moving to the org. We are Mostly really nice here.
Anyways back to your amv
It was good. not bad for a second amv if i do say myself. i wouldn't overly use so many effects. Some of the effects to a still frame matching the beats did not look good. it was nice tho. I throughly enjoyed it. the atmosphere was nice. Mood/tone whatever you wanna call it. It really fit . Good job!
Anyways back to your amv
It was good. not bad for a second amv if i do say myself. i wouldn't overly use so many effects. Some of the effects to a still frame matching the beats did not look good. it was nice tho. I throughly enjoyed it. the atmosphere was nice. Mood/tone whatever you wanna call it. It really fit . Good job!
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Turmoil
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Re: [Turmoil] "On My Own" -- Second AMV :)
thanks for the feedback guys It helps a lot with knowing how to actually improve
It helps a lot with knowing how to actually improve