Redemption

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Pikachew
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Redemption

Post by Pikachew » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:42 pm

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A same day edit because...I re-read the Elfen Lied manga and got a bad case of the feels. |:>

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Re: Redemption

Post by nihilant01 » Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:10 am

Nice video, this kind of song fit very well with a disturbing anime like Elfen Lied.
I only didn't like a couple of solutions: the blur felt a little inappropriate in the first half, and in the second I would have liked more clips than effects.
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Re: Redemption

Post by Kevmaster » Sat Jun 09, 2012 4:40 pm

I liked this. The varying editing in the different parts of the song was well chosen to match the music and you did some perfect scene choices. I just didn't like some transitions, letterbox/cropping effect and the color correction in the naked kid-lucy part.
Props for pushing focus on the seashell-scenes. Barely see that in amvs. The visual quality could have needed some more work.
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