Gungrave - Last Bullet
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mxchibandit
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Gungrave - Last Bullet
Feels good to finally get this out of my head. And this would also seem to be the first time The Murder of My Sweet's been used on this website, so here's to hoping I'll introduce them to some new fans.
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Kairih
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irriadin
- BUBBLES!
- Joined: Tue Jun 07, 2005 11:59 pm
- Status: I fight for my friends
- Location: Los Angeles, California
Re: Gungrave - Last Bullet
Pretty good video! Solid editing, but there were a few things that could have been better.
For goodness sake, don't arbitrarily throw in lip-sync during just one scene of your action video. It was very out of place. Also, watch how literally you interpret the lyrics. The line about the "smoking gun" is shown on-screen by displaying the one guy smoking a cigar... which felt odd. Lastly, I felt that the pacing of the video could have been a bit faster.
Good job, overall, though.
For goodness sake, don't arbitrarily throw in lip-sync during just one scene of your action video. It was very out of place. Also, watch how literally you interpret the lyrics. The line about the "smoking gun" is shown on-screen by displaying the one guy smoking a cigar... which felt odd. Lastly, I felt that the pacing of the video could have been a bit faster.
Good job, overall, though.