Lost Forever/New Girl (Neon Genesis Evangelion/OFWGKTA)
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Re: Lost Forever/New Girl (Neon Genesis Evangelion/OFWGKTA)
First of all, welcome to the org!
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Next up, let's review your videos.
Lost Forever & New Girl
Rap AMVs huh? Ehhh. I'm not the best at reviewing these, but I think you did a pretty interesting job with it. At least it wasn't the typical Evangelion AMV, so props for that. The scenes ran a little long, and I think you could have done a lot more cutting with the music and the words. Also, try not to re-use scenes , especially more than once. You might contact Reggiesmalls or Penny Royalty, who do this sort of thing really well, and might be able to give you some good advice.
Specifically in "new girl", I feel like you didn't have as much focus as lost forever. It starts out with the majority of it being about shinji/asuka, but we then get introduced to the rest of the characters very quickly, as well as eva 1's berserk feel. So maybe attempt to be a little a little more focused in this case? But when you did the scene at 2:38? THAT was clever. XD
Anyway, I got a fun viewing out of it
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Next up, let's review your videos.
Lost Forever & New Girl
Rap AMVs huh? Ehhh. I'm not the best at reviewing these, but I think you did a pretty interesting job with it. At least it wasn't the typical Evangelion AMV, so props for that. The scenes ran a little long, and I think you could have done a lot more cutting with the music and the words. Also, try not to re-use scenes , especially more than once. You might contact Reggiesmalls or Penny Royalty, who do this sort of thing really well, and might be able to give you some good advice.
Specifically in "new girl", I feel like you didn't have as much focus as lost forever. It starts out with the majority of it being about shinji/asuka, but we then get introduced to the rest of the characters very quickly, as well as eva 1's berserk feel. So maybe attempt to be a little a little more focused in this case? But when you did the scene at 2:38? THAT was clever. XD
Anyway, I got a fun viewing out of it