[AKROSS Con 2011] Ashes to ashes

[Neogrimm]

Video: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=185203
Category: Story, Drama, Action
Anime: Angel Beats!, Halo Legends, King of Thorn, Rainbow, Death Note, Bakemonogatari, Flag, Bakuman, First Squad, The Animatrix
Song: Where Do We Draw the Line
Artist: Poets of the Fall
Creator: Neogrimm


Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for YOU are with me;
Psalm 23


Hope you like it))

[pan_dbgt01]

I really admire your effort here. You are great with effects, but I don't think this was the right song/anime choice for the type of editing you used.

The editing was very fast in the beginning and then you sort of Candy edited some parts.

I think this AMV should have been more simple and flowy, rather than an effects video. (Or at least the effects should have blended with the video better, like Nostromo.)

I just want you to get better at what you do so don't take this the wrong way

[Neogrimm]

pan_dbgt01
Thanks a lot)))

[Chained(E)Studio]

Really great concept/idea!

But I do feel that your editing just didn't pull it all together, and needed some more work : ))