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Abyss of my mind

Post by nekomata_ensetsu » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:56 am

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Category: Horror, Drama, Serious
Anime: Pandora Hearts
Song: Broken Inside
Artist: Broken Iris
Creator: Nekomata_Ensetsu

My second AMV ever made and my first post on the org :D I have been stalking the forums for years now and never attempted to make my own AMV until now :D
YAY!
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Re: Abyss of my mind

Post by UpcomingDread » Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:48 am

This is pretty good for only your second AMV 8-)

I don't really like to much is seeing mouth movement when it isn't being used for anything, next time if you have to use scenes like that try masking over it or try hiding it in someway, also the ending was a little abrupt.
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Re: Abyss of my mind

Post by nekomata_ensetsu » Wed Nov 02, 2011 11:38 am

Thank you for your input. :)
I'll definitely work on the mouthing, I need to get over my hatred for the pen tool and just mask things already, since a lot of the movements I like have talking involved.
Also, I didn't realize how abrupt it was until I finished rendering and rewatched it, it actually drives me insane. >.<
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