Lucid Dream ~Haibane Renmei~
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Frezio
- Joined: Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:07 pm
- Status: Myon
- Location: Poland, Wlkp
Re: Lucid Dream ~Haibane Renmei~
Uhm, another fan od Haibane Renmei? Nice, it's so mysterious anime. Abe's always impressed me.
Amv as a first clip is good, but...
You slowed some scenes, right? Skips looks very bad. Scene in 1:55 when Rakka smell her hand imo doesn't fit
However quiet climat and balanced editing = 
Good luck with another project and i hope you will use Haibane Renmei once more.
Amv as a first clip is good, but...
You slowed some scenes, right? Skips looks very bad. Scene in 1:55 when Rakka smell her hand imo doesn't fit
However quiet climat and balanced editing = Good luck with another project and i hope you will use Haibane Renmei once more.
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Warlike Swans
- Joined: Wed Oct 20, 2010 3:38 pm
- Status: Pending
Re: Lucid Dream ~Haibane Renmei~
I liked it as a whole. Good flow, consistant mood-- very calming and dreamy.
There are problems with visual quality, (jerking in the pans and faded colors). Some of of the crossfades seem to cut off a touch abruptly. Toward the end when you see a character wake up in bed, and then see a close up from another scene* it is kinda jarring. It made me think the dream was over, but then it wasn't.
*The one Frezio also didn't like
There are problems with visual quality, (jerking in the pans and faded colors). Some of of the crossfades seem to cut off a touch abruptly. Toward the end when you see a character wake up in bed, and then see a close up from another scene* it is kinda jarring. It made me think the dream was over, but then it wasn't.
*The one Frezio also didn't like
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blu_light16
- Joined: Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:04 pm
Re: Lucid Dream ~Haibane Renmei~
Hello, thanks for the comments. Turns out, the skipping is actually the way the original footage looks. It just stands out more when you see it in a music video. I went in and adjusted a couple of scenes, frame by frame, to fix the problem, but it was a lot of work. The remaining skips don't really bother me that much, but I might fix them eventually anyway.
The ending is supposed to represent "waking" from a dream, followed by a conscious descent back into it (i.e. lucid dream).
The ending is supposed to represent "waking" from a dream, followed by a conscious descent back into it (i.e. lucid dream).