[KNT Pairings] All to Myself

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[KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by XEnchantedMarshie18X » Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:57 am

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Video: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself
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Category: Romance
Anime: Kimi Ni Todoke
Song: All to Myself - Marianas Trench
Creator: XEnchantedMarshie18X

I've been editing for years but I am just uploading my works in YouTube since I am just practicing/experimenting on a lot of styles before. Now that I can make a "decent" AMV (lol), I decided to make an account to make my videos available for download in this site. Even if I don't really care much about criticisms... I would appreciate them as long as they can help me improve my editing. Thank you so much.
Last edited by XEnchantedMarshie18X on Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by Kionon » Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:10 am

I'm a fan of this series. I have watched this. And... there are problems.

I'm not one to immediately bash any container, but WMV usually signifies low quality, and that is precisely what we have here. Your compression rate is terrible, and therefore the video is pretty ugly. A shame, because I could tell the video was pretty well edited. I liked the flow, and I liked how it fit the song. Your zooming effects would have been nice if you hadn't been using such lossy footage that it made the result pretty difficult to watch. You also clearly did not use the R2s because you had the 日テレ watermark in the upper right hand corner, which really, really stood out when you did zooms or flashes. Your effects as far as text and boxes would have been pretty nice, but you had pretty bad frame blending going on.

All in all, this video would have been way more enjoyable if I was able to get past the technical aspects of the presentation. You needed to:

1) Work with DVD footage, or at least HDTV rips that are cleaner and have been de-watermarked, and edit with them LOSSLESSLY
2) Make sure frame blend is off on all clips
3) Make sure frame blend is off on all images and effects
4) Tone down some of the more extreme flashes, because they often hurt the eyes
5) Export LOSSLESSLY
6) Compress into XVID and place in AVI or compress into x264 and place in MP4.

If you can manage to do 5 and 6, and reupload, I will make this a definite keeper. If you are capable of doing anything else in the above list, it will really, really make this effort great.

...this "destroying a new editor's hopes and dreams" moment dedicated to godix.
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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by XEnchantedMarshie18X » Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:40 am

For some reason, I already predicted that people would correct me more on quality xD Sorry for that... I don't have a good computer but I still wanna continue editing ;) Though honestly, it doesn't really matter much to me. I appreciate the corrections you made on the effects though cause I know they're kinda bad and I really needed some expert advice on that ^^'

Anyway, I'll try my best to improve on the areas you pointed out. Once again, thanks for the very detailed correction. I really needed that.

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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by TritioAFB » Mon Apr 25, 2011 6:35 pm

Hey my friend, nice to see you here in the org. I got a tutorial for the steps 5 and 6 that Kio has mentioned, but you'll need a lot of space in your disk
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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by AimoAio » Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:33 am

Despite the overabundance of crossfades, flashes, blurs and crazy FX, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this AMV! <3 <3 <3 Just because it's so damn cute and I loved seeing poor Kazehaya get all jealous. :P

Oh and do take the tips on quality mentioned in the above posts cause it could really make a drastic difference to your videos and I really would like to see you posting more here because I follow your videos on Youtube and I really do enjoy them. :mrgreen:

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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by S.A. Robert » Wed Apr 27, 2011 4:43 pm

I liked AMV, combination of music and video is good. =)
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Re: [KNT Pairings] All to Myself

Post by XEnchantedMarshie18X » Thu Apr 28, 2011 4:36 am

Thank you so much for the compliments! :D

Aaand you have no idea how thankful I am to find out about quality improvement and such. I just re-converted some of my videos using zarxgui (sp?) and yep, they actually look better now ;) Thanks again for the help, Kionon. Props for you. I'll be sure to do that in my upcoming uploads. 8-)

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