It was alright, I thought it needed more beat syncs here and there, but the flow overall was good. I wasn't too fond of the repeated scenes, it was getting a bit repetive after awhile. Also be careful with parts like
(01:17-01:27) it's was a bit too effecty. Sections I especially like was for example
(00:43-00:47) since it covered a part of Asuka's past which is a good thing adding on a character profile.
Good progress
