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Winter

Post by Sparky1-4 » Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:25 pm

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One thing that I would like to mention about this video right away is that it has no story, and is just pretty much random since the song is random(at least to me it is). The quality of this download also isn't all that great so if you want to see a better quality version just look at it on Youtube, here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t0qS2arVRPs

Well, that's all I have to say I hope you enjoy the video and give me any critique that you can :P
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Re: Winter

Post by Taite » Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:02 pm

Yeah yeah, Shinkai babeh.
/watches

Hmm, it was okay. It's just the song has nothing to do with either sources, and so everything felt so damn random. I don't know what the japanese part means, but just judging from the english lyrics is enough for me. That was probably my biggest problem. I just couldn't get into it because I didn't really understand what was going on. I've seen the two series, but understanding the two's stories didn't help with anything.

Only a few other things I disliked though.
I thought the flashing could have been a little more subtle, and then it could have gradually increased. That's what it looked like you did, but it ended too strong. And 2:10 was far too strong, since it wasn't synced to anything. It was just...there.
Also, the scribbly-film stuff was cool, but there was perhaps a bit too much. It was kind of distracting sometimes. But I definitely think it needed to be there.

The shatter at 1:39 was a little weird, since it didn't look like a shatter, but once I saw the little pieces of it fluttering around on the rest of the video I was like, "cool!"
The color on the video was very pretty, and the scene selection (while pretty random in my eyes) I was okay with. I liked the transition in the beginning between 5cm and Beyond the Clouds, too.

This would be more of an "upbeat romance" in my eyes though, because you used two romance animes. And because there is no other story than the ones in the anime, that was all I could see in the video.

Overall, it was okay. 3.5/5 :up:
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Re: Winter

Post by AimoAio » Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:17 pm

Getting this because I love Ellegarden <3

Will comment once I watch :D

Edit:
Taite wrote:Yeah yeah, Shinkai babeh.
/watches

Hmm, it was okay. It's just the song has nothing to do with either sources, and so everything felt so damn random. I don't know what the japanese part means, but just judging from the english lyrics is enough for me. That was probably my biggest problem. I just couldn't get into it because I didn't really understand what was going on. I've seen the two series, but understanding the two's stories didn't help with anything.

Only a few other things I disliked though.
I thought the flashing could have been a little more subtle, and then it could have gradually increased. That's what it looked like you did, but it ended too strong. And 2:10 was far too strong, since it wasn't synced to anything. It was just...there.
Also, the scribbly-film stuff was cool, but there was perhaps a bit too much. It was kind of distracting sometimes. But I definitely think it needed to be there.

The shatter at 1:39 was a little weird, since it didn't look like a shatter, but once I saw the little pieces of it fluttering around on the rest of the video I was like, "cool!"
The color on the video was very pretty, and the scene selection (while pretty random in my eyes) I was okay with. I liked the transition in the beginning between 5cm and Beyond the Clouds, too.

This would be more of an "upbeat romance" in my eyes though, because you used two romance animes. And because there is no other story than the ones in the anime, that was all I could see in the video.

Overall, it was okay. 3.5/5 :up:
Pretty much this. Didn't enjoy it that much but some parts were quite interesting I suppose.

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Re: Winter

Post by Sparky1-4 » Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:08 pm

Lol, well I warned you guys about the randomness.
I thought the flashing could have been a little more subtle, and then it could have gradually increased. That's what it looked like you did, but it ended too strong. And 2:10 was far too strong, since it wasn't synced to anything. It was just...there.
I noticed how strong the flicker was towards the end too, I debated whether or not to fade it out or something but eh..it was late and I was tired, so I just rendered it out and uploaded it hoping that scene would not destroy the overall enjoyment factor of the video.

Thanks both of you guys for watching my video :P
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Re: Winter

Post by S.A. Robert » Tue Jul 20, 2010 1:16 am

The good clip, only clips on these an anime have already bothered.
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Re: Winter

Post by Magnus » Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:59 pm

Elle- fucking -garden, oh hell this is getting downloaded!

Well, it could've been better, could have been worse. Did't enjoy it fully since it was, as you stated, indeed random.
Although, I appreciated your attempts to make something fresh using the sources. Too bad it wasn't executed to it's full potential.

Oh well, all in all - an interesting video, sort of fresh but still had it flaws.

Good luck on future editing!
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Re: Winter

Post by Nya-chan Production » Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:49 pm

Uhhh... 480x270 and still this bad quality? 29.92fps? :nono:

If the start was more artsy, it could pass as a nice M@D, the flickering was obnoxious, lasting this long.

Otherwise cool random Shinkai stuff, 4/5 and please fix the AR, fps and quality ;x
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