Take Me Under The Bridge
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Hobo General
- Joined: Sat May 26, 2007 12:14 am
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Take Me Under The Bridge
hey guys this is my second viddeo on this site, please give me all the citicism you can think of because i'am hoping to send this one out to a couple competitions if its well recieved here. Thank you for your time
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gotegenks
- Joined: Sat Oct 03, 2009 9:54 pm
- Location: charlesgood, california
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Re: Take Me Under The Bridge
fock yeah, fave band and anime, can't wait to watch 
watched : not as dissapointed as i thought i would be after seeing the .wmv, but it still was not great...
oversync, countless clip repetitions, and overall lack of buildup or variation made it boring after the first minute or two.
i admire your moxy for making it a mamimi centric (which couldn't have been easy) but i feel you could have done a much better job had it just been kind of a mood centric video or just more than one character OR SOMETHING to give you more ideal clips in your repertoire
i liked a lot of the mood you used in clips, but again the repeats dumbed it down and i could not get into it!
2/5 <:\
watched : not as dissapointed as i thought i would be after seeing the .wmv, but it still was not great...
oversync, countless clip repetitions, and overall lack of buildup or variation made it boring after the first minute or two.
i admire your moxy for making it a mamimi centric (which couldn't have been easy) but i feel you could have done a much better job had it just been kind of a mood centric video or just more than one character OR SOMETHING to give you more ideal clips in your repertoire
i liked a lot of the mood you used in clips, but again the repeats dumbed it down and i could not get into it!
2/5 <:\
