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by EvaFan » Tue Feb 09, 2010 4:53 am
This was a pretty creative idea, I think the execution was slightly off but you really got the emotions across at the very least. The only real problem I had with this was that you didn't use any of the scenes from the other animes showing why the people were fighting or who they were fighting for other then that first anime with the girl with wings. The idea/concept was really great but the execution just fell short a little bit.
I could be picky and complain that the font/fx work for the font was iffy but it didn't really bother me enough to really complain about it, however, it certainly leaves room for improvement in that area if you want to learn more about fonts/grunge work.
Aside from all of that I really enjoyed this and thought I'd comment since it hasn't received any yet.
4/5

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