The Perfect Enemy
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Omega Goku
- Joined: Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:56 pm
- Location: California
The Perfect Enemy
A pretty quick video I made after watching the movie
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dreamawake
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Re: The Perfect Enemy
Alright, the idea is good, and I can see the use of montage is there, but the editing in this felt very iffy. Too jumpy and didn't flow well enough with the song, your cuts kind of worked against you most of the time. I'll give you credit for the montage use tho, I think you have a lot of potential but this video just didn't really cut it.
Last edited by dreamawake on Thu Aug 13, 2009 10:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Vivaldi
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Re: The Perfect Enemy
I actually really liked this. I think the parts where you synced with jump cuts and black flashes didn't work too well, but the beginning and last half were lovely. You weren't as much a slave to beat sync as most action vids these days, but kept the intensity high with you mood and scene choices.
The quality was pretty iffy, I'll be saving this though.
The quality was pretty iffy, I'll be saving this though.
<Kenzichu> HAHAHA!!
<Kenzichu> everyone died!
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Omega Goku
- Joined: Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:56 pm
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Re: The Perfect Enemy
Yeah I really questioned the quick cuts but I went with it because I didn't want it to seem too boring. Thanks for the feedbackArashinome wrote:Alright, the idea is good, and I can see the use of montage is there, but the editing in this felt very iffy. Too jumpy and didn't flow well enough with the song, your cuts kind of worked against you most of the time. I'll give you credit for the montage use tho, I think you have a lot of potential but this video just didn't really cut it.
I'm glad you liked itVivaldi wrote:I actually really liked this. I think the parts where you synced with jump cuts and black flashes didn't work too well, but the beginning and last half were lovely. You weren't as much a slave to beat sync as most action vids these days, but kept the intensity high with you mood and scene choices.
The quality was pretty iffy, I'll be saving this though.
