Death Note The Beautiful People

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Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by micktam12 » Mon May 25, 2009 9:22 am

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I hope you can see the picture it looks kick ass ^^.
So yeah this is a remake of a AMV i made in feb this year. After effects gave me a lot of free space with it.
watch the original and see the difference.

Anime:Death Note (TV)
Song:The Beautiful People
Artist:Marylin Manson
Programs:Sony Vegas,Adobe After Effects,Gimp
creator:micktam12

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=166227
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by BurningLeaves » Mon May 25, 2009 10:26 am

From :01-:15 I liked this video... But then I kept watching it... Usually I'm the last to bash a video but this is all wrong. Your pacing is completely off, your scene choices are random, sync is almost non existent.. Quality is poor though you can barely tell from all the pointless effects slapped on randomlly and I would almost feel bad saying this to another creator if this video wasn't a blatant amateur attempt at spoil. I suggest thoroughly reading the guides to get the quality issues taken care of, drop the after effects and work on coming up with your own ideas.
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by Ikore » Mon May 25, 2009 12:22 pm

first, im not saying this sucks, it just could have been better...

i really hate Marylin Manson, but the video was fine, nice karaoke, some well done transtitions, some times you get to set a good timimg, but you miss it too much..., keep working with the fx, try to make the scene look less "static"
Spoiler :
whats the idea of the ending?, those old people singing? where´s the joke?
:down: you obviously have the skills to make an awesome job, just keep improving...
SING! Never mind the words!!!
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by Neverend » Mon May 25, 2009 1:17 pm

Allot of the effects was not done right.. and should therefore have been skipped...
More is not always better...
The sync could have been better, the flow was abit iffy.. and the 3D cam was way to hard.

I must say the only thing i really liked was the book!

Keep on it!
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by ExSphere » Mon May 25, 2009 2:11 pm

This was just an all around...bad video. I've seen the first one you made and it's really not that much of an improvment. Felt like you made the same mistakes again. The whole letter's going across saying the lyrics just made you look like a spoil wanna be. The fact that you did them in a uglier fashion made it even worse. I liked the opening sequence, but it seemed to just got worse as it progressed, and im not just saying that brah. Near the middle of the video you had some still frame masks that looked like they need to be re-masked or featherd with a bunch of blood flying everywhere ? All that did was make that whole segmet nasty as hell. 2:56 - 3:00 Was that an attempt at lip sync? or just lip flap?
3:37 - 3:47 again...lip sync or lip flap. Either way, it looked bad. Didnt help that you had a tv simulator effect going on all over it. Overall this video is a 2/5 at best... =(

Maybe next time your about to start editing think about your source. And think where hasn't this source gone before.
Cause I mean...Death Note with Marlyn Manson is a little too easy. Keep at it though man
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by micktam12 » Mon May 25, 2009 5:46 pm

Ok thanks for you comment some a agree with some i totally dont agree with. but thanks for downloading it and watching it :).

and yeah thanks for the comment that said "sucked" Doosh bag
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by Elcalavero » Mon May 25, 2009 10:45 pm

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BurningLeaves wrote:From :01-:15 I liked this video... But then I kept watching it... Usually I'm the last to bash a video but this is all wrong. Your pacing is completely off, your scene choices are random, sync is almost non existent.. Quality is poor though you can barely tell from all the pointless effects slapped on randomlly and I would almost feel bad saying this to another creator if this video wasn't a blatant amateur attempt at spoil. I suggest thoroughly reading the guides to get the quality issues taken care of, drop the after effects and work on coming up with your own ideas.
Same as BurningLeaves...............
also you need to learn how to control After Effects 2.5d camera properly.
From 1:16 to 1:18, respect the aspect ratio man :P. Dont use that horrible Sony Vegas Effect.
Typography used here was horrid. Try something different next time.
lol at the end with old men singing :nono:
And on top of all this... its a WMV file, next time make it a sexy MP4 :o
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Re: Death Note The Beautiful People

Post by SheeGee » Tue May 26, 2009 12:23 am

[MOD 403: flaming quote removed]

:shock:

ahhh aside from that....the video was eh. i guess i didnt like the flow from effects to raw editing. need to work on that.

plus some effects werent right. something like that i dunno....
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