First AMV on a-m-v.org XD

blackzin · Post by **blackzin** » Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:27 pm

Title: Indelible Sin
Anime: Fullmetal Alchemist
Song: Kesenai Tsumi by Nana Kitade

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=162164

I'm new here so it would be cool if u would watch it!

Ultimatetransfan · Post by **Ultimatetransfan** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 12:47 am

I thought it was nice, but it was a bit heavy on effects. Some effects were nice, others were just distracting. Timing was good, as was the quality of the video. Very nice for your first video.

Also, for next time, here's an easier way to post the info for your video on the forum.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... hp?t=76342

blackzin · Post by **blackzin** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:24 am

Yeah, my problem is that sometimes I don't really know which effects I should use and then it doesn't look good

Well, thanks for the compliment and the tip!

Shui · Post by **Shui** » Fri Nov 07, 2008 4:29 pm

Concrats, you successfuly created and amv, uploaded it to the org and made a proper announcement thread for your first amv here !

Thus I shall give you feedback :
It was enjoyable, and that's what it counts the most for me

Now for the technical review :

The synch was Ok, the effects were damn good for a first amv.
What impressed me is how you changed the effects concept in the different parts of the song, it's not very often seen on newbs.
Maybe from 00:39-00:41 there the song goes up for the main part (hopefully you get what I mean)
You synched it well right on the start when it flows into the refrain. But then its just like little videos floating around. That kills the atmosphere.
I like it more if the motion stands out on the highs of the song.

I see a lot of petential, if you need beta reviews or help, pm me.

(my english might be not the best)

btw. the cut-off is too sudden :/ atleast put some random footage in and blend out the song