One Week With Sunako (Wallflower)

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One Week With Sunako (Wallflower)

Post by SheeGee » Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:50 am

<b>Video:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/video/161811">One Week With Sunako</a>
<b>Category:</b> Comedy, Fun
<b>Anime:</b> Yamato Nadesico Shichihenge (TV)
<b>Song:</b> One Week
<b>Artist:</b> Barenaked Ladies
<b>Creator:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/usernum ... uhist91</a>


this is my first time making a comedy but i think i did ok =/ haha

at first i was really reluctant at watchin and reading wallflower cuz i wasnt really into the animation (bishonen boys with glossy lips not really my thing) but after giving it a go, i fell in love with it and especially the fast pace of the anime.

when i told myself im gonna make an amv, i decided i'd make the amv fast paced too and the song that came to mind was one week by barenaked ladies!

anyways pls watch and comment/op!

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Post by LeapofFate » Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:33 am

I told you earlier, but I guess I'll tell you again.

I liked the basic sync, internal sync, and some of the lyric sync. Though, the sync was off at times.

I didn't like the pushes and the white bar.

Aspect Ratio is wrong and quality needs work.

Though, i know you were having trouble with the script.

I thought you would hold up with the upload until you fixed the problem.
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Post by SheeGee » Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:42 am

i was gonna hold up on it but i totally gave up. actually i finished this amv 2 days ago and ive been trying to fix it but i gave up today T_T

i'll prob ask to reup it if i get it fixed

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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Aug 22, 2008 8:03 am

I love this song.

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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:31 pm

This had potential for greatness. However, it was littered with bad design choices. Incorrect aspect ratios, pixilated quality and some off sync just made it feel less and less appreciateive. If the smaller issues had been fixed, and had the transistioning from one section to another section more intiuitive and some scenes shortened, it would have been a lot better.

As it is, it's just a slightly above average video that could have been so much more better.

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