She wants Revenge: A little blue gender love story.

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Post by Scaledkittah » Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:31 pm

*laugh* well I was going for eerie, one friend called it "Way way too odd" as well. So thanks for what I consider a compliment. :D I just have to remember that eerie and disjointed isn't always a good thing when an amv should flow a bit better with the song selection. And not exactly everyone else's cup of tea.

But I think I do see what you and others are getting at now, storytelling is a tricky thing and this attempt did kinda flub it in that respect. The end really doesn't make much sense at all compared to the beginning. That and the strech just after the first chorus should have been redone. I think I kinda had one idea at the start, like a horror movie feel using more clips of blue and characters biting it. It just kinda morphed into that weird romance idea by the end, and I forgot to tweak that section to fit. Funny part is I could actually see a redo of this vid using more blue clips, have them doing the singing about how much they love tearing silly humans apart.

But hey onto the next one, thanks for the input! I'll try and get the audio tweaked out right then too.
In any case young babies are easy, say compared to a mobile two year old. AKA a compact engine of apocolyptic destruction.

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