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by Kalium » Wed May 14, 2008 6:50 pm
First, upload your videos here. It helps. A lot. Your second video doesn't even have a working link, and the first one downloads at a remarkably slow speed. It took me, oh, about twenty minutes to download the first video. Rather a lot of time for 70-some megabytes.
Now, the video itself.
I'm kind of confused by this. I may have missed it, but there doesn't seem to be any overriding theme or narrative here. Lots of semi-random action scenes, an effects reel, and a few spots that could be mood synch. But nothing clear and coherent. By the end, I have no clue what the fark I just watched.
On the upshot, you know how to edit in a technical sense. Work on the coherency part of it.
2.5/5 for being mostly incoherent.