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My first AMV Rumblings Hearts

Post by vizzionn » Wed Mar 19, 2008 1:50 pm

Hi im new to here plus this is my very first amv i have done so input is welcomed thanks .


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Post by vizzionn » Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:42 pm

heh 36 views and no comments :wink: i know there has to be something i can improve on i need feedback :o

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Post by CodeZTM » Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:50 pm

Well, Ima gonna download it and review it. Fully!

This is the first AMV I am going to download on my fecking glorious brand new high speed internet. * I esh so excited *

*squee*

^_^

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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Mar 20, 2008 10:22 am

My opinion:

Video Quality: :down: Could have been a lot better. I mean, ALOT better. Looks like downloaded footage or perhaps a fan sub.

Editing: I was actually pretty surprised with the editied. You really captured the mood of the song and executed your concept really well. Sometimes your clips dragged on a little long, but this wasn't frequent. You also had some lip flap here and there, which was annoying. Also, try and make some attempt at some beat sync. But that's just me.

Concept: Nice concept. I realy liked it a lot. I haven't seen much of this anime, so it was nice to see something different.

Climax: Around 3:10, the climax and denomont of the song occured. You missed those. A change in scene would have been appropriate, and something really emotional.

Overall, it was pretty average, but still just SLIGHTLY above average. 3.25/5.00

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Post by vizzionn » Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:30 pm

thanks for the review ill try my best to watch out for those things in my next one

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