Parallel Shuffle!

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Linkthe1st
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Parallel Shuffle!

Post by Linkthe1st » Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:12 am

Spent some three weeks on this and more time than I'd like to spend in an editing program.

I don't claim to be a good editor but I hope this is a massive improvement over my other works. It's been three years since I submitted a video and since then I have learned to use real editing software (AE).

Don't really know what I was aiming for with this vid, other than to prove to myself that I could make something at least half interesting out of still images.
I hope you like it.


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Kalium
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Post by Kalium » Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:46 pm

While interesting for what you've done with stills, I can't help but feel there's something missing. My first guess is that you worked with the lyrics.

All of that said, it seems like a fairly standard MAD. Something about the pacing seems a little off, though. The music is pretty active and fast-paced. While there's continual motion, it doesn't stack up to the lively music.

Three of five. It takes guts and a lot of work to work in stills only, so you get credit or that. However, I'm not seeing anything beyond a general overview of Shuffle here, so you take a big hit for that. Finally, the pacing issues.

Keep at it, though. This is promising.

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