Justify- Death Note AMV

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Justify- Death Note AMV

Post by LaAmanex » Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:35 pm

<b>Video:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... Justify</a>
<b>Category:</b> Action, Other, Fun
<b>Anime:</b> Death Note
<b>Song:</b> Justify
<b>Artist:</b> The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
<b>Creator:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... aAmanex</a>

Just finished not too long ago.
Took only a few days to make, but the result came out alright I think.
I hope you all enjoy this.

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Post by ihavethedeathnote » Sun Feb 24, 2008 4:33 pm

it was pretty good
not 2 many effects
i lyke it but wat is the story line because i got confused in the middle of it :?:

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Post by LaAmanex » Sun Feb 24, 2008 4:43 pm

ihavethedeathnote wrote:it was pretty good
not 2 many effects
i lyke it but wat is the story line because i got confused in the middle of it :?:
Thanks.

Ah, yes... The plot.
There kinda was a plot in there.
How Light is tired of the people.
Kinda like the anime itself. You'd know what I mean.
How light wants to get rid of some people, and how the things he goes through with people in his life... But in the end, shows how Misa has the same idea. etc
But I don't think I made it super clear. But hope that helps a bit.

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Post by Tearx » Sun Feb 24, 2008 4:49 pm

I agree that the storyline was fuzzy, but now that you explained it
I can see it =D
Im glad you took out some of the shakes :lol:
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Post by dreamawake » Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:54 pm

Horrible video quality, i wanted to rip my eyes out, and the audio quality was no better.

Editing was choppy as hell, shakes were bad, flow was tolerable at some points, but mostly sucked. Aspect ratio is wrong. I saw orphan frames.

So yeah, in general, I couldnt even finish watching this past about a minute and a half.

1.8/5
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Post by Naizashi » Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:10 pm

Im gonna start off by saying the quality was really bad you should get help on getting better quality. I didn't like the amv and heres the reason why the sync was off in some parts and with the quality as bad as it was it was kinda hard for me to see what was going on. I thought the shaking stuff didn't fit it was just going all over the place i would of liked it more without it and if you would of done some more beat sync and lyrical sync aswell. I think you should work on your flow was kinda off. I would say this amv is about light and that blond girl but in some parts of the amv i felt it got random so you can say im a lil confused about the story here. Things i think you should improve on are quality editing/flow. anyway overall 2/5 i wish you good luck with your future amvs.

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Post by Neverend » Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:40 pm

I see potential, i have no idea how long you have been editing..
First im not a big fan of death note (Havent seen it) And more and more amvs is with death note nowadays :/

And as joey said about the quality... its really meh!

Tear you should have thought her that before he she it realesed it!

2.5/5

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