In Your Eyes

Emotive · Post by **Emotive** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:08 am

I almost turned it off in the beginning, but it was ok.
Does the song start like that? I'm assuming you cut the beginning out.. Which was pretty lame.

The white bars you used around 00:38 were no good, you should have done something else in this part.
I didn't get the random unstoppable flashes at some parts in the choruses at all.. What were they doing there? They just disrupted the flow.
The story lacked continuation at many parts.. Which means you just went from some scenes to some other scenes that seemed like they had nothing to do with the previous ones. If it really had a story.

Finally, I have to say, I'm pretty happy this dress person died.

It was overall much more decent than expected, keep it up.
5/10.

Valcidious · Post by **Valcidious** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:46 am

Cast to Stone wrote:I almost turned it off in the beginning, but it was ok.
Does the song start like that? I'm assuming you cut the beginning out.. Which was pretty lame.

The white bars you used around 00:38 were no good, you should have done something else in this part.
I didn't get the random unstoppable flashes at some parts in the choruses at all.. What were they doing there? They just disrupted the flow.
The story lacked continuation at many parts.. Which means you just went from some scenes to some other scenes that seemed like they had nothing to do with the previous ones. If it really had a story.

Finally, I have to say, I'm pretty happy this dress person died.

It was overall much more decent than expected, keep it up.
6/10.

Thanks. But the reason those random black flashes were there was not because of me. That's just part of the anime.

Emotive · Post by **Emotive** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:59 am

xblaze9 wrote:Thanks. But the reason those random black flashes were there was not because of me. That's just part of the anime.

No one forced you to use the randomly flashing scenes. Existing or not, the result in the amv is the same..

DayWalker B. · Post by **DayWalker B.** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:38 am

/gets... comments will follow later.

Edit: That was not bad, I enjoyed it. I thought you cut the song a bit too short though and I didn't really like the glows. But it had pretty good flow and solid lyric sync, so good job. Keep it up man. 3.5/5

Unlimited Rice · Post by **Unlimited Rice** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:10 pm

That was pretty nice. The white fuzzy bars kinda killed it for me though at that one part.

Naizashi · Post by **Naizashi** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:59 pm

It was nice. I agree with Unlimited Rice about the fuzzy bars 3/5. keep it up dude

Autraya · Post by **Autraya** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:44 pm

CodeChrono wrote:Intersting.. I'm not a big Kenshin fan, but Autraya is so I'll getty before she gets a chance to lookie. ^_^

*Emits Burly Warcry*
/dloads post haste

*edits* Ok a few things I noticed.
Your source is supposed to be widescreen right? whar is eeet?
the visual was aarggh looked like dloaded footage or you edited with xvids
Some of the scenes in the first part were just hmm not in the right place, they disrupted the whole story.

Other than that editing was pretty good, but like whoever said it before I'm sick of seeing kenshin presented the same way, your ending was a mite different to normal and you avoided some of the overused scenes but not nearly enough to make this stand out.
sorry not sold on this one 2/5

Zero Link · Post by **Zero Link** » Mon Dec 10, 2007 1:18 am

Miineeeeeeeee aswell get it.

Valcidious · Post by **Valcidious** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:28 pm

Autraya wrote:
CodeChrono wrote:Intersting.. I'm not a big Kenshin fan, but Autraya is so I'll getty before she gets a chance to lookie. ^_^
*Emits Burly Warcry*
/dloads post haste

*edits* Ok a few things I noticed.
Your source is supposed to be widescreen right? whar is eeet?
the visual was aarggh looked like dloaded footage or you edited with xvids
Some of the scenes in the first part were just hmm not in the right place, they disrupted the whole story.

Other than that editing was pretty good, but like whoever said it before I'm sick of seeing kenshin presented the same way, your ending was a mite different to normal and you avoided some of the overused scenes but not nearly enough to make this stand out.
sorry not sold on this one 2/5

Alright thanks ^^"
I'll just work harder on my next vid

....If I ever get around to another full one lol.

MycathatesyouAMV · Post by **MycathatesyouAMV** » Wed Dec 12, 2007 3:45 pm

That was a hella of a smexy improvement. 4.5/5, and goes somewhere on my favs list. Liked everything except i dont know y or if it was I couldnt hear the sound, but there appeared some crazy random black flashes in the more actionish parts.