FLCL - Nocturnal Commendation

Prodigi · Post by **Prodigi** » Thu May 17, 2007 10:08 pm

I have a feeling he's going to raep our womens.

lynit · Post by **lynit** » Thu May 17, 2007 10:12 pm

Ahh yes. On time as always =D

Hae · Post by **Hae** » Thu May 17, 2007 10:19 pm

...well i actually watched this one.
being so reluctant to listen to advice really astonishes me.
but i'll throw a bone. part of it brought a decent mood to the song. the freakish color alteration did some justice.
ah but man, you can't synch for your life.
please, i'm begging you, i'll freaken lap dance for you if you just learn to synch!

...i'm serious.

jubjub2 · Post by **jubjub2** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:27 pm

LookatDain · Post by **LookatDain** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:35 pm

Why do you guys give him any attention?

Minion · Post by **Minion** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:38 pm

jealous?

LookatDain · Post by **LookatDain** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:47 pm

Minion wrote:jealous?

Indeed. :]

SilversLightning · Post by **SilversLightning** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:52 pm

LookatDain wrote:Why do you guys give him any attention?

because it's fun :O

LookatDain · Post by **LookatDain** » Thu May 17, 2007 11:58 pm

DivineQueenYeiweh wrote:
LookatDain wrote:Why do you guys give him any attention?
because it's fun :O

As such. Suppose maybe he/she is just really deficient in some ways of thinking, and maybe you guys are enjoying it a bit too much? Perhaps? Nitpicking?

bombush · Post by **bombush** » Fri May 18, 2007 12:14 am

I guess part of the problem is that you followed the video you said this one is based on. It's really slow-paced with long scenes, following of which killed your amv. The beginning was very promising but then the length of the clips stretched too much and it ceased being any fun (for example the 00:00:22 clip - after a promising start, one long clip with exaggerated effects to ruin it). The effects in the beginning worked too but they slowly degenerated into a total black/blue/pink mess.

I would suggest to avoid any unnecessary lip-flap in your next work.

I see what was your intention but those long clips just don't work in an AMV.
But you're getting better little by little.
Last suggestion: read the guides, listen to the advices, watch good AMVs, take your time and one day maybe...

Cornwiggle wrote:He would if everyone said THEY like them. Notice how he says "HOPEFULLY this one is good" he completly relies on what everyone else thinks and not himself.

After dozen of his videos being rejected and him still not understanding why, because he himself sees them as good (nobody's the same) I'm not surprised too much.

On the other hand Cornwiggle points out one of your problems (at least I think) - and that might be lack of self-criticism. Just look for every flaw your video might have, watch others' videos and figure it out.