Heheh, as I heard you got the encoding part done now ^^
It's Sunday, I should be doing some school stuff... so, here's this:
About the story:
I didn't get some of the scenes, like at 1:24-1:27, it's a flashback of some sort, but why? it explains nothing. And the girl is never seen again.
pretty, original, "helps" my eyes by saying, "yo, you should pay attention to this exact spot".
- The flow was really nice, easy going at the right time etc etc ^^
- Interlaced TT.TT
- The eeeeeending left me with a feeling that nothing's resolved, which is ok, I guess, conflict stuff.