* Author's note:
* Software engineering is the part of computer science which is too difficult for the computer scientist.
Impiety wrote:About the story:
I didn't get some of the scenes, like at 1:24-1:27, it's a flashback of some sort, but why? it explains nothing. And the girl is never seen again.
Nice sun-flares pretty, original, "helps" my eyes by saying, "yo, you should pay attention to this exact spot".
- The flow was really nice, easy going at the right time etc etc ^^
- Interlaced TT.TT
- The eeeeeending left me with a feeling that nothing's resolved, which is ok, I guess, conflict stuff.
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