TC: I think the zoom at the beginning is too much and too fast
at 0:06 you could add a little flash maybe or a zoom or both? there is a big beat there and you didn't emphasize it so that's why.
0:11 and 0:12 - I think you should remove that transition, a kind of slide or whatever that is
0:10 and 0:11 - there were some beats that could have been emphasized more
that's it I guess, nice track!
Edit: oh and also, I'm sorry for being late, but I'll give you beta next week >.< I'll have a break so please await for it sometime next week
TwilightChrono wrote:I need a progress report Peeps.
TEKnician wrote:I feel like I rushed mines a bit too fast. I haven't had the time to look at everyone else's but I feel they might just blow mine out of the water.
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