A Dissipating Storm

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A Dissipating Storm

Post by RED Movie Maker » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:02 am

This is my first post and my first AMV. Hope I did this right.

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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by Kionon » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:02 am

It was okay. I could stand to keep it around.

Your processing was decent, but your aspect ratio was wrong, and you had some interlacing artifacts at the end.
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by Kimberly » Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:58 am

Agh, I didn't like the white flashes. They were annoying and I didn't really like the TV Sim either.

But it's alright for your first AMV.
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by RED Movie Maker » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:07 am

Incorrect aspect ratio was incorrect due to quite an :oops: oversight. :sweat:

._. Can I get some ratings so I have a better sense of what you guys think.

Sensitive AMV maker is working on a nice slow AMV.
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by Kionon » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:10 am

RED Movie Maker wrote:Incorrect aspect ratio was incorrect due to quite an :oops: oversight. :sweat:

._. Can I get some ratings so I have a better sense of what you guys think.

Sensitive AMV maker is working on a nice slow AMV.
I don't often give ratings. Others do. Sometimes I give letter grades. This is your first AMV, so taking that into account you get an E for effort. Get rid of the interlacing and correct the aspect ratio and I'll give it a K for keeper.
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by RED Movie Maker » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:26 am

Kionon wrote:
RED Movie Maker wrote:Incorrect aspect ratio was incorrect due to quite an :oops: oversight. :sweat:

._. Can I get some ratings so I have a better sense of what you guys think.

Sensitive AMV maker is working on a nice slow AMV.
I don't often give ratings. Others do. Sometimes I give letter grades. This is your first AMV, so taking that into account you get an E for effort. Get rid of the interlacing and correct the aspect ratio and I'll give it a K for keeper.
Mayyybe I'm not sure what you're talking about with the intrerlacing. Can you give a 0:00 time if it's not too much trouble?
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by Kionon » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:28 am

Sure. 01:38 and 01:47 for sure. Might be a few others scattered about. Did you slow down footage at those points?
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by RED Movie Maker » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:33 am

Wow. I'm not even sure if I'm catching what you're talking about. XD

And I think I did slow it down.
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by Kionon » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:40 am

RED Movie Maker wrote:Wow. I'm not even sure if I'm catching what you're talking about. XD
See his face?

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And I think I did slow it down.
Editing program?
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Re: A Dissipating Storm

Post by AaronAMV » Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:45 am

Kionon wrote:
RED Movie Maker wrote:Wow. I'm not even sure if I'm catching what you're talking about. XD
See his face?

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And I think I did slow it down.
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That's the TV Sim effect in Vegas
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