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Portrait of Grief

Post by martypan » Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:53 am

Video: Portrait of Grief
Category: Action, Drama, Serious

Main Song: Never Too Late - Three Days Grace
Ending Song: Kaisouroku - Key

Anime: Kanon (2006)
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my second amv so far.
hope, my editing isn't that bad at all.

now i'd like to know, what you think about it? opinions, criticism, improvement suggestions appreciated. :]

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Post by Oli.C » Mon Apr 28, 2008 1:20 pm

Checking out! o:

EDIT: Excellent work! Or be it with a few ittybitty flaws e.g. I didn't like the flying cake :? ... Anyway, loved how it opened and closed, and most of the bits in between!

4.25/5 :up:

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Post by Lirinis » Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:02 pm

Nice transitions, neat editing.
The flying cake was really unnecessary. And lipsync... it was good, but I'd like to see more or none at all.
One of the best Kanon amvs I've seen.

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Post by LeapofFate » Mon Apr 28, 2008 7:14 pm

O:

a kanon video
/gets.

edit:

Good stuff man
I can see why you put the cake in there but it way out of place and the fly away just made it really weird.

When i read that you used 3DG i was a bit skeptical because i have seen a lot of videos with this band...plus I don't like the band though you made it work for me O:

anyways i enjoyed it 4/5

Can't wait to see some more work from you.
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Post by OropherZero » Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:20 pm

lol song about suicide, knew you were going to use Mai, anyway love it 4/5

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Post by Chimolem » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 pm

in the imortal words of the most ignorant b!_%# out there..Thats hawt... brilliant edit...
the flying cake was a lil much...lol 4.5/5

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Post by Koopiskeva » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:27 pm

:sideways thumb:
Hi.

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Post by Anths555 » Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:27 am

that rocked now i have to go buy it cant wait for the rest of the english dub to come out

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Post by Flo' » Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:52 am

Wow, very excellent work :shock: Never Too Late FTW.
4.5/5
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Post by -BL- » Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:20 am

It was enjoyable to watch :up:
Some things like the cake, some of the masks and the lip sync bothered me, but still one of the better Kanon vids imo.

Keep up the good work =)
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