Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by AimoAio » Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:10 pm

Animated wrote:what bothered me the most is the linear storyline you showed us. Even though I couldn't understand the story of the video at all, it seemed like a collage of some anime sequences which were edited in a very unfitting action way.
Pretty much agree with this. It's not a majorly bad thing though or I would have mentioned during beta-testing. My biggest gripe personally was when you tried to show too many linear scenes at once, making the pacing really fast for a supposedly slower verse sequence. Sometimes you gotta let the music and the viewer fill in the blanks themselves to make things more interesting. That being said, too abstract and people will get lost :rofl: so you gotta find that balance yourself. Anyway it was pretty nice and good song choice. :up: (Celldweller <3)

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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Post by Eake4 » Thu May 02, 2013 6:35 am

Hmm so I didn't post here yet. The AMV itself has a confusing storyline for me but still a very adamant one. While cutting of the video seemed like it didn't flow all that well for me, it felt like I was watching an anime instead of an amv so if that was the intention, you've done a great job at that. This video gives me the semi-tritio effect vibe, seems like you are straying away from your original style. :shark:
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Re: Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Thu May 02, 2013 9:20 am

Thanks everyone and thread updated with the new video :up:

What;s the 'semi-tritio effect vibe' eake?

I'll have to keep that in mind in the next proyect since it's going to be more abstract that 'Live or Die' thanks for the feedback
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Re: Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

Post by Koneko » Sun May 05, 2013 5:24 pm

it's hard to find amvs with this kind of music, good job tritio :)

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