Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

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Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby NotFound404 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:35 am

I've got a dream when the darkness is over
We'll be lyin' in the rays of the sun
But it's only a dream and tonight is for real
You'll never know what it means
But you'll know how it feels
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Re: Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby mirkosp » Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:53 am

Mmmmh... I thought it was okay-ish.
I'd say the scene selection was mostly fine, but it really needed a tighter sync. As it stands, scenes are just there for too long, the timing is loose, and that makes the video feels slower than it should... it gets boring rather soon, I had a hard time finishing it, to be honest. Still a rather decent watch, the show and audio source fit each other pretty well imho, but that's not enough on its own I think.
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Re: Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby NotFound404 » Thu Mar 15, 2012 9:39 am

mirkosp wrote:As it stands, scenes are just there for too long, the timing is loose, and that makes the video feels slower than it should... it gets boring rather soon, I had a hard time finishing it, to be honest.

XD I know it could be boring, but I did it on purpose, I just tried to split what you see from what you hear. Sometimes it works, specially with live action movies, but I still could not get a decent result with anime.
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We'll be lyin' in the rays of the sun
But it's only a dream and tonight is for real
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Re: Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby EkaCoralian » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:40 am

This was pretty nice; I think some scenes were a bit drawn out too long sometimes, but otherwise the pacing seemed to go really well together.
Also I wasn't really sure if at first you meant to speak about Hachi's feelings of wanting to be in space, or if you wanted to focus on him and Tanabe's relationship. Maybe a combination of both? I dunno, I would've preferred if you stuck with one (unless I missed the message you were conveying. ^^; )
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Re: Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby NotFound404 » Sat Mar 17, 2012 2:11 pm

EkaCoralian wrote:Also I wasn't really sure if at first you meant to speak about Hachi's feelings of wanting to be in space, or if you wanted to focus on him and Tanabe's relationship.

^^It's the same feeling after all, she's like the Moon for Hachi, I guess.
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We'll be lyin' in the rays of the sun
But it's only a dream and tonight is for real
You'll never know what it means
But you'll know how it feels
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Re: Baby is on the Moon Kissing the Butterflies

Postby kyle_m » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:09 pm

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