mirkosp wrote:As it stands, scenes are just there for too long, the timing is loose, and that makes the video feels slower than it should... it gets boring rather soon, I had a hard time finishing it, to be honest.
EkaCoralian wrote:Also I wasn't really sure if at first you meant to speak about Hachi's feelings of wanting to be in space, or if you wanted to focus on him and Tanabe's relationship.
Users browsing this forum: Kitty-Galia and 2 guests