

godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.

HazeFM wrote:Yeah, I lol'd.
Sort of reminds me of a watered down Chill Out.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


Taite wrote: Bad quality

1) Quality of the clips -- There was really bad blocking and banding, probably because you used downloaded footage. Obvious because of the logo. You could tell when you zoomed in on clips too. At :49 and :56... looks like utter crap.
2) The blood added on the clips of Clannad looked like crap. None of it was believable because it all was so obviously added there. When Nagisa was shot, when Tomoya punched Sunohara, when Tomoya shot Fuuko.... I honestly laughed every time I saw the blood... it looked so cheap![]()
3) The blood splatters with the text. I think it definitely needed to be there, but the quality of it just looked bad.
4) The photoshopping/masking of the guns. The guns didn't look real whatsoever, and they were all blocky. Every time a gun popped up, it wasn't until it was gone that I realized that it was actually a gun.
5) The little question mark at the end that was added when there was a gunshot. Wasn't intense really. And it was just... weird how that part went down.
6) The masking on Tomoya in the very beginning where you showed Nagisa behind his head several times. Too much feathering so it looked bad.
7) The reversal of the clip of Tomoya at :58. You could see the tear fly back up
8) The text. Grammar was fine, thank god, but the way I see it is that if you need subtitles or text in general to make your story come across... at least make it look good. And don't use all caps. I don't even know why you did that. The text muddles the intensity of your story to be honest :/
1) Good song. It fit.
2) Good scene selection that helped set the atmosphere and tell your story (before it was ruined by crap-editing.)
Terrible execution of your story. Bad quality, bad effects/masking/whatever it was. It would have been so much more enjoyable if you had executed it well, but that's too bad :/
1/5
EDIT: Also, I don't know who was beta testing your video, but they all need to go die in a hole.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.

Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.

taite wrote:-legitimate and mostly true complaints about a flawed video-
OtakuGray wrote:I'M NOT PERFECT THEREFORE I AM EXEMPT FROM CRITICISM SO GO AWAY.
JUST BECAUSE I POSTED AN ANNOUNCEMENT THREAD IN A WEBSITE THAT IS KNOWN FOR GIVING HARSHER CRITIQUES DOESN'T GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO GIVE ME WHAT I ASKED FOR
OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.
taite wrote:-legitimate and mostly true complaints about a flawed video-
OtakuGray wrote:I'M NOT PERFECT THEREFORE I AM EXEMPT FROM CRITICISM SO GO AWAY.
JUST BECAUSE I POSTED AN ANNOUNCEMENT THREAD IN A WEBSITE THAT IS KNOWN FOR GIVING HARSHER CRITIQUES DOESN'T GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO GIVE ME WHAT I ASKED FOR
[/quote]OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.

OtakuGray wrote:Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go
Your mom is constructive criticism. Go troll on a good amv like a good little editor.
OtakuGray wrote:Grow up
Enigma wrote:OtakuGray wrote:Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go
Your mom is constructive criticism. Go troll on a good amv like a good little editor.
So, Leaving constructive criticism is trolling?All needed to say about the video has been said, You said everyone's a perfectionist on this site, But this is 'the org', You're not going to get constructive criticism from a damn viewer, just from an editor, so grow up and take his comments for your next video to be better
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.

OtakuGray wrote:He takes this hobby too seriously. Go get lives people.
OtakuGray wrote:I posted it for Viewing. If i just upload..no one will see it and wuts the point then?
OtakuGray wrote:gotegenks wrote:OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.
you're*
Grow up.
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