Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

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Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:18 pm

godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby SomeWhiteFellow » Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:17 pm

Yeah, I lol'd.
Sort of reminds me of a watered down Chill Out.
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:38 pm

HazeFM wrote:Yeah, I lol'd.
Sort of reminds me of a watered down Chill Out.


Congrats.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby Taite » Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:56 pm

The bad:

1) Quality of the clips -- There was really bad blocking and banding, probably because you used downloaded footage. Obvious because of the logo. You could tell when you zoomed in on clips too. At :49 and :56... looks like utter crap.

2) The blood added on the clips of Clannad looked like crap. None of it was believable because it all was so obviously added there. When Nagisa was shot, when Tomoya punched Sunohara, when Tomoya shot Fuuko.... I honestly laughed every time I saw the blood... it looked so cheap :lol:

3) The blood splatters with the text. I think it definitely needed to be there, but the quality of it just looked bad.

4) The photoshopping/masking of the guns. The guns didn't look real whatsoever, and they were all blocky. Every time a gun popped up, it wasn't until it was gone that I realized that it was actually a gun.

5) The little question mark at the end that was added when there was a gunshot. Wasn't intense really. And it was just... weird how that part went down.

6) The masking on Tomoya in the very beginning where you showed Nagisa behind his head several times. Too much feathering so it looked bad.

7) The reversal of the clip of Tomoya at :58. You could see the tear fly back up :asd:

8) The text. Grammar was fine, thank god, but the way I see it is that if you need subtitles or text in general to make your story come across... at least make it look good. And don't use all caps. I don't even know why you did that. The text muddles the intensity of your story to be honest :/

The good:

1) Good song. It fit.

2) Good scene selection that helped set the atmosphere and tell your story (before it was ruined by crap-editing.)

3) The story actually had potential to be entertaining.

Summary:


Terrible execution of your story. Bad quality, bad effects/masking/whatever it was. It would have been so much more enjoyable if you had executed it well, but that's too bad :/
1/5 :down:


EDIT: Also, I don't know who was beta testing your video, but they all need to go die in a hole.
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby SheeGee » Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:01 pm

i like the story but the editing was ehh idk wat to say. i think taite pretty much covered that part for me imo
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby Enigma » Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:04 pm

Taite wrote: Bad quality

>wmv
>720p
>10mb
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:18 pm

1) Quality of the clips -- There was really bad blocking and banding, probably because you used downloaded footage. Obvious because of the logo. You could tell when you zoomed in on clips too. At :49 and :56... looks like utter crap.


oh wah. Its not perfect quality because im not a fucking perfectionist like everyone else who makes amvs.


2) The blood added on the clips of Clannad looked like crap. None of it was believable because it all was so obviously added there. When Nagisa was shot, when Tomoya punched Sunohara, when Tomoya shot Fuuko.... I honestly laughed every time I saw the blood... it looked so cheap :lol:


ok ill go make a real life video so it looks real enough for ya. (sarcasm)

3) The blood splatters with the text. I think it definitely needed to be there, but the quality of it just looked bad.


Again, i am not a perfectionist. You knew it was blood. i did my job.


4) The photoshopping/masking of the guns. The guns didn't look real whatsoever, and they were all blocky. Every time a gun popped up, it wasn't until it was gone that I realized that it was actually a gun.


I'm sorry that i cant make a cartoon look like its holding a real life gun. Next time ill try and make it so ****ing real u can see the sweat being rubbed all over the trigger. -_-

5) The little question mark at the end that was added when there was a gunshot. Wasn't intense really. And it was just... weird how that part went down.


it wasnt "added."It was there and it did what all the other text did. it turned red to illustrate a meaning and a point. god.

6) The masking on Tomoya in the very beginning where you showed Nagisa behind his head several times. Too much feathering so it looked bad.


i was going for a kind of dreamy feel. i got the point across. Again, job done.

7) The reversal of the clip of Tomoya at :58. You could see the tear fly back up :asd:


i cant believe u wud notice that, let alone anyone else. its kind of pointless to mention.

8) The text. Grammar was fine, thank god, but the way I see it is that if you need subtitles or text in general to make your story come across... at least make it look good. And don't use all caps. I don't even know why you did that. The text muddles the intensity of your story to be honest :/


I'm SO sorry. Next time ill try to write a book or just scrap all text and let u guess wtf was going on.


1) Good song. It fit.


one of the few nice things u said.

2) Good scene selection that helped set the atmosphere and tell your story (before it was ruined by crap-editing.)


yeah well i hate ur editing too. :up:

Terrible execution of your story. Bad quality, bad effects/masking/whatever it was. It would have been so much more enjoyable if you had executed it well, but that's too bad :/
1/5 :down:


fuck u 2. :up:


EDIT: Also, I don't know who was beta testing your video, but they all need to go die in a hole.


Your so nice.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby Enigma » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:21 pm

Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go :up:
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:29 pm

Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go :up:


Your mom is constructive criticism. Go troll on a good amv like a good little editor. :up:
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby gotegenks » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:31 pm

taite wrote:-legitimate and mostly true complaints about a flawed video-

OtakuGray wrote:I'M NOT PERFECT THEREFORE I AM EXEMPT FROM CRITICISM SO GO AWAY.
JUST BECAUSE I POSTED AN ANNOUNCEMENT THREAD IN A WEBSITE THAT IS KNOWN FOR GIVING HARSHER CRITIQUES DOESN'T GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO GIVE ME WHAT I ASKED FOR



OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.

you're* :aimkissyface:
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:33 pm

taite wrote:-legitimate and mostly true complaints about a flawed video-


He takes this hobby too seriously. Go get lives people.

OtakuGray wrote:I'M NOT PERFECT THEREFORE I AM EXEMPT FROM CRITICISM SO GO AWAY.
JUST BECAUSE I POSTED AN ANNOUNCEMENT THREAD IN A WEBSITE THAT IS KNOWN FOR GIVING HARSHER CRITIQUES DOESN'T GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO GIVE ME WHAT I ASKED FOR


I posted it for Viewing. If i just upload..no one will see it and wuts the point then?


OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.
[/quote]
you're* :aimkissyface:

Grow up.
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godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby Enigma » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:33 pm

OtakuGray wrote:
Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go :up:


Your mom is constructive criticism. Go troll on a good amv like a good little editor. :up:

So, Leaving constructive criticism is trolling?All needed to say about the video has been said, You said everyone's a perfectionist on this site, But this is 'the org', You're not going to get constructive criticism from a damn viewer, just from an editor, so grow up and take his comments for your next video to be better :up:

OtakuGray wrote:Grow up

says you :aimkissyface:
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby OtakuGray » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:35 pm

Enigma wrote:
OtakuGray wrote:
Enigma wrote:Woah, Calm the fuck down.No need to rage when someone leaves constructive criticism on a video, Way2go :up:


Your mom is constructive criticism. Go troll on a good amv like a good little editor. :up:

So, Leaving constructive criticism is trolling?All needed to say about the video has been said, You said everyone's a perfectionist on this site, But this is 'the org', You're not going to get constructive criticism from a damn viewer, just from an editor, so grow up and take his comments for your next video to be better :up:


My next video will be wut i want. This critique wont affect or change it. You didn't say anything about my video except pointless details about the encode that everyone already knew.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.


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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby gotegenks » Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:40 pm

OtakuGray wrote:He takes this hobby too seriously. Go get lives people.

-points to signature-
people here take this hobby seriously, go to youtube if you want to suck and not be called for it.

OtakuGray wrote:I posted it for Viewing. If i just upload..no one will see it and wuts the point then?

again, go to youtube, many, many more people will see it there, and you don't have to deal with pesky losers takin apart ur flawless videos.

OtakuGray wrote:
gotegenks wrote:
OtakuGray wrote:Your so nice.

you're* :aimkissyface:


Grow up.

i did, and that's how i know that "your" is a possessive, and "you're" is a contraction :awesome: (of "you+are" fyi, which is what you're looking for since taite doesn't own any so-nice's)
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Re: Heart Warming - Clannad AMV

Postby Taite » Wed Jul 07, 2010 5:08 pm

lololol wooow. Srsly, getting butt-hurt because I took the time to explain why I thought your video sucked? Why even announce your video on the org if you don't want crit? You know you're gunna get it. So quit being a little poonanny.

Oh, and I'm a girl. DUR DA DUR. :bzz:
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