Con/Crit please?

[emma.destruction]

Hi ^_^ I'm new and stuff. I've done two AMVs before (in 2007, actually) and I'd like some opinions of them. They are both on youtube but one has been disabled due to copyright on the music. So, here is the link to the other. I greatly appreciate constructive comments, i would really like to improve.
(apologies for the crud quality, its youtube. I will reload onto a better host this weekend.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aD26ty2AlM

[Kionon]

You should create an entry in the catalog here on A-M-V.org. We cannot leave you opinions if you do not have an entry made. Once the entry is made, you may upload the video to our local server. Furthermore, once you do so, you can use the vidid tag so we know exactly which video to go to.

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[Enigma]