It's getting better.
]i don't know about the window i don't hear a word window =\
Sorry I couldn't understand the lyrics. >_> I meant on the "we" on "we are empty".
- At 0:09 You still didn't time to the cymbal crash.
- 0:16 to 0:22 needed more scenes, the video seemed to really slow down in the action here
- The eye scene at 0:25 seemed very sudden. It was a very short, quick scene that wasn't really timed to anything, and it was a little strange how it was suddenly black and white just for one scene. The scene would be better placed on a "loud" or sudden sound in the song, like a split second before where it is now, where the singer goes "
empty"
- The black space is very long at 0:30
- From 0:30 to 0:57, the song kind of goes into a quiet, flowy-sounding "lull", but I didn't notice that big of a change in pace or mood of the video. I think this section could definitely use a lot more cross dissolves to make the scenes all flow into each other better, the scenes could be a little more consistent in length throughout the section. The scenes of the torpedoes at 0:43 seemed like too actiony of a scene for this part of the song. The Haibane Renmei scenes worked well here though. And in general for this section, you have to pay attention to the subtle sounds in the music. There's no big cymbal crashes here to time to, but you can still sync to changes in the singer's voice, like when he emphasizes certain sounds, or to the guitar melody in the background. From 0:36 to 0:37 you did flashes on two of the regular drum beats again. I'm telling you there are more interesting things to sync to.
- Nice sync to the cymbal crash at 0:57
!! now... to uh... publicaly humiliating myself!!!
... =|..
