Alright. I've never written a song before so this might not be very good. It's about being chivalrous but the world taking advantage of the kindness or not knowing of your deeds at all (happens to me all the time, I'm very polite and giving). I mainly have the chorus and a small piece of another part of the song.
3 beat |..|..|..|..| (ONE two three ONE two three ONE two three...each ONE is stressed a bit more than each two and three) This can be easily understood if you put this to the beat of "Hero" from Chad Kroeger and Josey Scott.
SONG TITLE: CHIVALRY
chorus:
He hopes he'll be noticed and tries with all of his might
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but society is blind and it cannot see the light.
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They say chivalry's dead but it's only hard to find
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for it's found to be thriving in that young boy's mind.
that little bit I mentioned:
blah blah blah blah proud (I haven't finished it yet. LOL)
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his actions speak for themselves but they aren't very loud
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=(
This is pretty crappy huh? It would be a good song if someone with musical talent got a hold of this.
(This song is mainly based off of me although I'm using a small child as the main character. I thought this would be a good way to express myself but I can't do it. Hopefully someone else out there considers themself to be chivalrous so they understand where I am coming from.)
I need ideas for a song I'm writing...
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