I need help with this "Please Teacher!" video I'm

[RamonesFan2020204]

I started work on it this afternoon. I've been working on it alot today, and it's not finished. I just don't know what clips to use. I scrapped what I assembled (because I was dis-satisfied), and started from scratch several times. I just don't know what to do. This is the current cut:

0:00.00
(Black screen fades to a night sky in ep.8)

0:01.11
(music starts)

0:04.16
(cut to Kei and Mizuho walking along the shore line [?] in ep. 8)

0:17.01
(cut to Mizuho putting her hand in the water)
I've tried so hard

0:19.15
(cut to Kei watching Mizuho with her hand in the water)
To make you understand
That this is not a lie

0:24.15
(cut to next shot of Mizuho)
Believe in me
And if you-

0:28.01
(cut to next shot of Mizuho and Kei)
-take my hand
And look me in the eyes

0:32.17
(cut to next shot of Mizuho)
What other reason can I give to you

0:40.05
When I want you

0:42.12
(cut to next shot where Mizuho stands up)
And I need you

Screw it, here's just a video file:
http://s46.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=27G5 ... 3RX71D4MRG
In case you haven't noticed:Yes, the music and footage is cut off at the end, because this video IS NOT finished. I'm not sure what clips I want to use after that. I don't even know if I like what I've assembled so far. And if you must know, here's the full song lyrics:

I've tried so hard
To make you understand
That this is not a lie
Believe in me
And if you take my hand
And look me in the eyes

What other reason can I give to you
When I want you and I need you
What other reason can I give to you
When I want you, 'cos I love you

The two of us
Have got a fighting chance
But you don't want to win
Now is the time
You gotta, break the chains
But don't you dare give in

What other reason can I give to you
When I want you and I need you
What other reason can I give to you
When I want you, 'cos I love you

How much stronger must I stay
Until you find out you believe
In love

What other reason can I give to you
When I want you and I need you
What other reason can I give to you
When I want you, 'cos I love you

*When I want you and I need you
When I want you 'cos I love you

* repeat 'til fade