Celestial evolution. (MODs please don't lock)

[Zero Beat]

Hey All you mods out there i'm begging you to not lock this thread delete the others but not this one. i'm sorry for the multiple threads but the others were turning into off-topic rant threads.i just want this one.


and for the rest of yall i'm just looking for opinions.drawings,and/or advise.on my idea.BlackStarSwitcher2008 is to be ignored inless it has something to do with the plot. okay i'll start again. i want my dream of creating a manga to come true and here inthe forum is the only place i can get help and advise.


1st season

Five years form now on star planet a girl is born. Her parents name her Miachuasha. Soon they begin to notice demonic qualities in their child. They take her to a local witch and the witch confirms that Miachuasha is indeed part demon. In order to keep the demon at bay and keep Miachuasha pure is to teach her 3 things; sprit, courage, and love a demons lacking qualities. The witch summons three guardians and orders them to teach Miachuasha these things at different times in her life. There was grandfather star a wise man of sprit, Rulan a brave man, and last Eros the love sprite. When she turned thirteen the first guardian came; grandfather star put Miachuasha to the test strengthening both her mind and sprit. Seven years later he died and Rulan took his place, the tow fell deeply in love and when Miachuasha’s training of courage was complete the wed and had kids using the mystic kiss (no stars don’t have ***) one day when they were shopping in star omega market Miachuasha stops by a jewelry shop she finds that it is run by a young sorceress who needs and will do anything for a home (even beg which she dose) Miachuasha lets her stay in her second house in exchange for free jewelry and five tricoins a month (20$) she doesn’t know that the sorceress (Mayen M. Mystics) is the last remaining of her kind because she killed her own people. When they get home Rulan goes missing Miachuasha finds him under Mayens control mayen explanes that she’s a demon-possessed sorceress like she’s a demon-possessed star. Mayen explanes a way to fid the demon of her self if she can gather the3 star eclipse crystals, she threatens to kill Rulan if Miachuasha doesn’t get the crystals for her.(mayen isn’t bad at all only her demon. After going to three different realities and getting the crystals Miachuasha rids Mayan of her demon and Mayan releases Rulan. And they carry on a year later Eros shows up and Miachuasha immediately dumps Rulan for this hunk. Mayen comforts Rulan as she and him leave to go live in mayens “house” (Miachuasha donen’t know that mayen has a secret. End of first season



FIRST HALF OF SECOND SEASON:

while eros and miachuasha get all lovey dovey mayen and rulan go off in to dark star forest. rulan asks where ther going. mayen responds that there goin' to live with some frends of hers. as they're walking a boy with bkacl hair a black shirt and a fang earing stepps in front of them he nood to mayen and lets them pass. they come to a door in the gruond and mayen opens it she shows rulan the place explaining that she built it and its inhabiting ERAs ( Enegry Reusing Androids) in order to destory miachuasha. rulan relizes that mayen has been waiting for a chance to kill his ex ever seince they met her. mayen tells him that she is not thier friedn but an evil version an android the origonal created but this android was nothing like the orignial, she was mean bossy and rude. after rulan makes a break for the exit he is captured and thrown in a holding pen. that night the same boy they met in the forest (android 1) comes by he explanes that he and the rest of the ERAs want thier leader back and will set him free if he helps them. rulan agrees and th1 sets him free and tells him that he knos a way to improve his(rulans) strength that is to turn him in to a cyborg. he agrees and he and 1 escape. they run to miachuashas house and tell her that mayen is planning to bring the whole ERA army to kill her because the android is part demon that needs to live off a chosen ones (miachuashas) heart to survive. as soon as they warn her they hear a loud noise and turn around to see mayen and the arny prattically at her door step! END OF PART ONE.


SECOND SEASON PART TWO.

when we last left off the ERA army was at miachuashas. mayen steps forward. she talks a some trash to mia. and the fight begins one after one the androids fall until only mayen is left. Miachuasha demands to know where the real mayen is but the android won't give up that easly. she uses her power to resurect the androids and fuse them in to the mighty Ultamae. Faced with this threat Eros draws a sword and steps forward to protect his girl friend. Ultamae to draws a sword, the sword of the dark gem. when anyone is killed by this sword they cannot be brought back in any way shape or form that anyone has seen. the love sprite and the android engage in battle. after falling to the ground eros is about to be shiskabobed but ultaman suddenly starts to cough and sputter. when the androids fused 1 was fused too and he was using his portion of control to drain Ultamaes power. with his power gone Ultamae can no longer weild the sword of the dark gem. after he drops it eros quickly kills him. then miachuasha goes after the mayen android. she stops dead and explodes and in her place drops the real mayen. they all go home to party and mayen goes to rebuild her androids (make em good this time). but little did anyone know that miachuasha was soon to be visited by a man that has planned her death for a while...... Janidan D. Switcher.
END OF SECOND SEASON.


there you go. i repeat MODs please i'm begging you to not lock this thread.

[MOD: This kind of thing really isn't suitable for the General Anime or any other of our forum sections. There are plenty of other forums that you could take it to outside of the Org and I suggest that you do so.]