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Kimi No Na Wa「 AMV 」 | COLLIDE

Post by DiggerShelduck » Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:18 am

I hope you like it
and I love critiques





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Re: Kimi No Na Wa「 AMV 」 | COLLIDE

Post by vkamv » Fri Nov 09, 2018 8:52 pm

DiggerShelduck wrote:
Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:18 am
I hope you like it
and I love critiques
Audio/Visual: Visually I found the quality to be excellent. Clean and crisp. Your choices of transitions and effects fit well as well. A nice variety of zooms, camera pans, twists, and exposure blurs. I did, however, think that the zoom at 1:09 was a bit too strong. The song had an excellent variety of slow and upbeat moments, and the lyrics went well with the anime source and theme you were going for.

Synchronization: I thought that the sync was pretty solid for the first two minutes. However, from 2:24 to 2:35 I felt some of the scenes were too long and could have been synced to the beat better. There’s a lot of different sound effects and the visuals didn’t really match them. Perhaps simply shorter scenes would have worked or match the cuts to the beat. I really liked the subtle sync work you did at 0:50 with the birds passing each other to match the lyrics “roads collide”.

Story/Theme: Overall, you did an excellent job fitting the visuals with the lyrics and conveying the theme of their two lives/worlds colliding with each other. Good scenes of them apart, together, and then seeking each other out.

Definitely enjoyed this more than your fight AMVs and I look forward to seeing more of your work!

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Re: Kimi No Na Wa「 AMV 」 | COLLIDE

Post by DiggerShelduck » Fri Nov 09, 2018 11:51 pm

vkamv wrote:
Fri Nov 09, 2018 8:52 pm
vkamv wrote:
DiggerShelduck wrote:
Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:18 am
I hope you like it
and I love critiques
Audio/Visual: Visually I found the quality to be excellent. Clean and crisp. Your choices of transitions and effects fit well as well. A nice variety of zooms, camera pans, twists, and exposure blurs. I did, however, think that the zoom at 1:09 was a bit too strong. The song had an excellent variety of slow and upbeat moments, and the lyrics went well with the anime source and theme you were going for.

Synchronization: I thought that the sync was pretty solid for the first two minutes. However, from 2:24 to 2:35 I felt some of the scenes were too long and could have been synced to the beat better. There’s a lot of different sound effects and the visuals didn’t really match them. Perhaps simply shorter scenes would have worked or match the cuts to the beat. I really liked the subtle sync work you did at 0:50 with the birds passing each other to match the lyrics “roads collide”.

Story/Theme: Overall, you did an excellent job fitting the visuals with the lyrics and conveying the theme of their two lives/worlds colliding with each other. Good scenes of them apart, together, and then seeking each other out.

Definitely enjoyed this more than your fight AMVs and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Thank you so much for watching and writing an elaborate review.

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Re: Kimi No Na Wa「 AMV 」 | COLLIDE

Post by Kireblue » Sat Nov 10, 2018 11:09 am

I liked the parts where the song slowed down, but when the song picked up, it felt like the scenes were being left behind. I think that you could have capitalized on the sound effects and beats of the song a lot more. I also feel that there are times where the song has really big shifts in it, but you didn't have shifts in your scene selection to mirror that. I think that this guide does a really good job at explaining how to flow between different segments of your song https://youtu.be/J5Jjxb6Lw7s

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