Let me know what you think. It's posted here and now on the front page at the beginning of the OP!!

I also sent out my BETA to everyone as well.
Let me know your thoughts here in the thread.


K. I'll get right on that.TC: I think the zoom at the beginning is too much and too fast
Doesn't leave a lot of room for a flash but i'll see what I can do.The scene there wsa her jerking out of her sleep to the lyric "Try Not To Wake Me"at 0:06 you could add a little flash maybe or a zoom or both? there is a big beat there and you didn't emphasize it so that's why.
It's the best transition I could find that goes well with the mask of her standing up. I'll try and look for something different then.0:11 and 0:12 - I think you should remove that transition, a kind of slide or whatever that is
They were all emphasized o_0? You didn't notice a hand go through her stomach then the pivit of scenes to the "al-al-a-a-all I see" lyric? And I even hit it to the "duhduh-duh-duhduh" beat right before it and after with a short fade to black followed by the mask and slides. If I "Empahsize" anymore beats there It'll be massive over-synching. I think that part is fine as is. But I'll do something about the slides.0:10 and 0:11 - there were some beats that could have been emphasized more
Glad you enjoyed it.that's it I guess, nice track!
RogerEdit: oh and also, I'm sorry for being late, but I'll give you beta next week >.< I'll have a break so please await for it sometime next week


I'll be sending in my final tomorrow.TwilightChrono wrote:I need a progress report Peeps.
