True story!xD, im glad you like it, and yeah i noticed that thing at 0:14, i will change itTwilightChrono wrote: Not a nice girl at all XD
. Also let me say thank you for suggest me Chaos;Head, at the start i couldnt imagine that anime with this song xD, but surprisely it fits well 
Yup. I thought it might.[madaraxD] wrote:True story!xD, im glad you like it, and yeah i noticed that thing at 0:14, i will change itTwilightChrono wrote: Not a nice girl at all XD
The pink haired doll is his obsession. he's what the people in the sereis refer to him as: "Otaku Nerd" But the girl is just being friendly with him to fulfill her own needs and not because she likes the main character.AimoAio wrote:Madara: Not what I imagined with this song and I don't really like all the crossfades to be honest, but it does fit quite with the theme quite well. I think at 0:11 it might be better if it was a photo of the guy and not the girl otherwise the lyrics kinda don't make sense. Also at 0:13 that scene feels a little long/slow, maybe you could add an overlay of the guy? By the way I think your flash is a little offbeat, so might want to move it a few frames earlier. Unlike TC, I have no prior knowledge of Chaos Head so I have no idea what the pink haired doll means at 0:19 but I think you can make the zooms lighter and remove the crossfades. 0:22 and 0:23 where you did a red flash on the masked character looks kinda out of place, I preferred it when you flashed the whole screen instead. The ones on the buildings/objects in the end scene is a nice idea though, except maybe as an addition, you could add some overlay scenes as sync so it doesn't look as still and empty.
Ah yeah, I thought it was something like that since he did have a pretty creepy face on when he was holding the doll. >__> I just wasn't 100% sure. The track is nice though but I know madara's editing and I also know he can definitely make it much much better. ^^TwilightChrono wrote: The pink haired doll is his obsession. he's what the people in the sereis refer to him as: "Otaku Nerd" But the girl is just being friendly with him to fulfill her own needs and not because she likes the main character.
Anywho, I understand. I honestly think the track flows quite well. And the pacing is nice. Regardless of whether or not you've seen Chaos;Head, I still think it's enjoyable to watch. Granted you understand it a bit more if you've seen C;H.
x2AimoAio wrote:Madara: Not what I imagined with this song and I don't really like all the crossfades to be honest, but it does fit quite with the theme quite well. I think at 0:11 it might be better if it was a photo of the guy and not the girl otherwise the lyrics kinda don't make sense. Also at 0:13 that scene feels a little long/slow, maybe you could add an overlay of the guy? By the way I think your flash is a little offbeat, so might want to move it a few frames earlier. Unlike TC, I have no prior knowledge of Chaos Head so I have no idea what the pink haired doll means at 0:19 but I think you can make the zooms lighter and remove the crossfades. 0:22 and 0:23 where you did a red flash on the masked character looks kinda out of place, I preferred it when you flashed the whole screen instead. The ones on the buildings/objects in the end scene is a nice idea though, except maybe as an addition, you could add some overlay scenes as sync so it doesn't look as still and empty.
I've gotten it and watched it. I honestly don't know what to say when it comes to this track. I have no clue what's going on in this track. I'm not trying to be harsh. So don't think I am. I'm just not sure what you're going for is all. Can you enlighten me a little? So that I can give a proper review?SatoshiSakura wrote:Just sent a beta. ~thatsreallyrandom