My hell...

)v(ajin Koji · Post by **)v(ajin Koji** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:44 pm

then God would have fire ears

kthulhu · Post by **kthulhu** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 4:47 pm

Kamoc wrote:it would be a lot better if satan had laser eyes.

Did someone say laser eyes?

Veldrin · Post by **Veldrin** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 5:05 pm

Sick.

Ravenwing · Post by **Ravenwing** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 10:33 pm

Ok it's not like I was trying to make you happy or something. Just posted it you not like oh well. Most poetry I write has no feelings in it. Ironic really cause neither do I.

azulmagia · Post by **azulmagia** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 10:46 pm

My parody of Ravenwing's poem, I apologise in advance for it:

I've died
Gone to hell
Slept with Satan's wife
Damn that's swell
Now I'm in bed with her
Flames all around
Satan bursts right in
Says he knew all along
Now he's finally here
He wants my ass
Which used to be paddled and tattooed
Pulling me with his eyes
I pull a "kamehameha" in that cavern
I run that friggin place now

Ravenwing · Post by **Ravenwing** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 11:09 pm

I don't mind. That was funny tho.

azulmagia · Post by **azulmagia** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 11:13 pm

Just don't use rhymed verse and blank verse in the same poem from now on, it's just not what the professionals do.

Ravenwing · Post by **Ravenwing** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 11:29 pm

Wanna make a bet. I've always done that and I've had a few published.

Veldrin · Post by **Veldrin** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 11:34 pm

The book on how not to write poerty.

- By Ravenwing